July 28, 2016 at 5:32 pm #230
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December 17, 2016 at 9:45 am #469
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Beacon in the Dark is amazing. I totally get their world, and in turn, it is helping me understand Conan’s universe. The descriptions you do are very real, and it makes me realize I really need to see the world through my character’s eyes to make such life like descriptions. The dialog is tight as always, but I am going to read this several times hoping to soak up the atmosphere you describe.
It is so good, it makes me hesitate to post at all. I was thinking of posting the first part of Aria’s tale, but OMG…it’s not good enough. I will polish it more and try to post it soon.December 17, 2016 at 6:04 pm #470December 17, 2016 at 10:18 pm #476
TrackerParticipantDecember 17, 2016 at 11:24 pm #477
KalikerParticipantDecember 18, 2016 at 10:00 am #479
Color me impressed, sir! I really enjoyed all of Kaliker’s origin story, it was well written and painted a vivid picture. I do hope we’ll get the opportunity to see more of his story before launch, he does have quite the title you know? I’m definitely looking forward to hearing it all in character as well, lol.
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